Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Becoming Succubi [story]

This is not a caption, but a story
The image links to the complete version.
It is the first and second part of a piece I wrote a long time ago. They have been joined together in one document, so I have deleted the previous post containing only the first chapter. I have rewritten it a bit before uploading, but those of you who followed me on DeviantArt will find only slight changes


  1. loved it!!! every bit of it

  2. Thank you very much :)
    Could I ask you to elaborate? It's wonderful that somebody actually reads the stories, but it would be even better to have some thumbs up and thumbs down about what works well and not so well. I promise not to take any crticism too personal :D
    I've been wondering if I should be uploading more stories, but there doesn't seem to be much of an audience here for those kinds of things.

  3. I liked it but I want to hear what happens next!


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